Solved by verified expert:-Please I need comments on this poem by my classmate following the instructions….1. Try to come up with at least ten meaningful, helpful comments (i.e., not “This is great! You deserve an ‘A’!”) Really try to help your peer as he or she moves on to the next draft.2. Praise what you like. If you can only think of ways to praise a work (and are having trouble criticizing the work), try to figure out why you like this work so much. Try to explain why to yourself and the writer. 3. Ask questions. If some part of the work, sentence, or idea does not make sense to you, ask the author about that part of the work. Also, feel free to ask questions that will help the author actualize his or her ideas a little more completely in the next draft. Ask the types of questions that will help this work develop in revision.4. Make suggestions. Suggest different ways this work could develop in revision. If you think it would be appropriate, suggest that the author or poet check out certain rules.5. Critique what doesn’t work for you. If some aspect of this work feels problematic for you, try to explain the problem (and possibly how the author or poet could better address the problem). 6. With all types of comments, please be specific. Try to explain why you feel the way you do.You may type ten separate comments or you may let your comments and ideas collect in longer paragraphs. Additionally, remember to give others the courtesy, respect, and depth of commentary that you would hope to receive from them.
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Garrett L. Zahner
“What have you done?”
I remember her face filled with innocence
and though she was older, the heart of a
child. Then too do I remember her mate,
the first man, him too filled with youthful
ignorance. “What have you done”
you ask? I did you all a favor, at the cost
of everything for me. Your freedom, purchased
with my sin. So dark the great con
of man, that lie you tell yourself.
My named smeared and distorted through the
eras by your falsity, perjury committed in
the great chancery of truth itself. You believe
me temptation, but I am your deliverance.
Abandoned in the chasm of time is the
truth of my act.
My family too, gone.
My brothers of the choir abandoned
me to the wrath of the father. My soldier
brother dared not raise his sword in
my defense. The messenger would not
speak on my behalf. And the healer left
me to mend myself.
From that fruit I gave you knowledge
to be who you wish. But no,
I am the boogie man, I am Satan,
I am temptation. I can find no rest,
not even the night can set me free.
Though chained with damned shackles,
I still remember. I remember I did it
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